A good conjunction is “but;”
However, “can’t” could work, but then we’re knee-deep in contractions
which interests me in terms of the way you contracted this
cutting off words like a fireback
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The not-debate is really romanticism versus realism
If this were
If this were
If this were
a game (which it’s not)
then, we’d have to choose sides and pieces.
And what about these woulds?
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It’s not as easy for us. I pronounce words.
(maybe, it’s not as easy for you) . In the imperfect world; this worked for you.
To really do it again; to come back to this (though why would I want to) – would require a “re.”
As in revenir; or retourner, but there will be no reconnaissance,
What about these woulds?
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No matter how you permutate it
would is still an “if”
a rounded trunk; thick with history and age; full of sap; ragged and wind-torn and ravished; bitten-at.
would is still felled –
Sorta closed
Sorta gnarled
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Can’t you see? I’m a careful manager.
I’m brave enough to be stunned,
but, never stunted.
© Umansky 2010
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